24.4.10

WIP 3nvy and Valentine




Fixing the line art MORE FEEDBACK PLLLEEEASE!


I really don't like coloring blonde hair....
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 24, 2010 at 4:22 AM

    o.o I just noticed his hip.... that's either some kind of weird tumor or broke his back maam. though that bone/muscule you have very well defined there is well there it actually pulls up more towards the rib cage and the defintion of the muscule fades into the large muscules on the back. So his back should be a smoother curve and if you pull that defintion line up a little an don't have it connecting to the back. Other than that you're good. I like your hands positions like that are always a bitch to draw..
    Ha I'm like a walking anatomy book today

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  2. A.G.F.April 24, 2010 at 4:33 AM

    Yes yes!!! Thank you! Something about that has just been eating at me!!! Nyah! And it's like...I know there's something wrong but the issue doesn't wave a flag. I refigger it before I go any farther on his skin.

    And Hands are a bitch but I looooove to draw them. I also want to fix her buppie (As well as do more with her skin) so it's pressed against him and I'm hoping to also remove the 'comic bookie' like lines, I dunno yet though @_@

    But yes these kinds of comments really do help.

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  3. ChelseaApril 24, 2010 at 8:54 AM

    The hair looks good! ;D

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  4. AnonymousApril 25, 2010 at 8:39 PM

    his back looks better :D
    I'm also pretty sure that if you're going for having her boobies pressed against him you won't see her nipple unless she just has really odd nipples/boobies. also at the point where they press againt him would be a little flatter, not much but just a little, they're water baloons remember! lol XP unless of course they're just like touching him and not actually pressed against him, I can't really tell either way o.o

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